Academic Language Week 6 - Citizenship

I think that undocumented immigrants should be given a citizenship because I am one myself and from my point of view I think it will SIMPLIFY things. At the same time I also kind of think that immigrants should not be given a citizenship because they should VERIFY so they could pay things they need to pay for example a house. I think if immigrants should have citizenship they need to still go through the paperwork SEQUENCE so then they can do possible things such as vote. This is what I think, personally, about undocumented immigrants being given their citizenship.

"marigolds" lizbeth shoes paragraph

Promptb:
I remember a time when I heard my mom talkin about moving
Somewhere else because we didn't have any money. I was
Kind of scared at first because I thought that "somewhere
Else" would Probably mean the street. This had happened because my dad
Used to work for carpeting so he got a unexpected call
And went to LA to work for a week and my mom had no clue where he was
,so she assumed he was cheating on her and that's when she decide to leave him and move on
He came back a week later and my mom my sister and I were sleeping on one of my
Moms couches. I felt terrible and wanted to help my mom with money but I didn't know
How to, there was no job that would accept a ten year old. We had to sell most of he things we had and we ended up with not much but no we are unfortanetly scattered across the world.
But hopefully we all end uP together again.

"Marigolds" Before You Read: Moving into Adulthood

I think that some of the fears that teens have that follow while they are moving onto adulthood are living alone, sleeping alone, money. I think the main fear is money because when they are teens, some kids don't know how to save money but then they wonder how they are going to live their adulthood if they don't know how they are going to pay for rent and how they are going to live if they don't have money at all. I think that people should prepare for problems like this when they grow up so then they don't have to deal with these things and end up on the streets.

Dragons Den:ABC's About Me

Always on time
Born in 1997
Came from Honduras

Does like chicken
Eats a lot of hot dogs
Fragile
Good with school and sports
Helpful
Interesting
Joyfulness
Kindness
Likes to be alone most of the time
Mainly has guy friends
Not a fan of Justin B.
Obviously likes the color purple
Positive most of the time
Quiet sometimes
Recently won a volleyball game
Sometimes make the wrong decision
Try new things
Unexpectedly made the volleyball team
Visualizes everything a different or certain way
Works on things I need to work on when not doing something
Xenophobic
Yappy most of the time:)
Zany sometimes

Academic Language Week 5 - Vaccinations

I think that children should get vaccinations and yes it is good for children because now days children are getting more and more sick faster and faster. I am not trying to say that vaccinations would prevent all sickness or diseases but it will prevent some and it will get them sicker slower. Most children are allergenic towards what gets put in their bodies,I think the doctor should illustrate what the child is allergic to before they vaccinate a child.I think that children should stay positive towards vaccinations because they help against sickness, diseases and diseases spreading. Estimating how many children have got sick and died are about 9 million.

Most dangerous game plot diagram

"Thank You, Ma'm" letter to Roger

Dear Mrs. Luellen Bates
I am writing to let you now that I am so thankful that you decide to help me out that day when I "accidentally" snatched you pocketbook. I am glad that I actually tried to take your pocketbook because if I did'nt then I would'nt have went to your house and done all the things I did that led me here in my nice house with my children and wife and my nice big house. I thank you again for everything I hope we can get to meet up spmeday. Please write back and I want to hear from you, and I want to know if your doing good.
Sincerely, Rogers

"Thank You M'am" Before You Read: Going Gets Tough

There is some truth to the saying “When the going gets tough, the tough get going.”
I think this because when you are stuck in a situation it does get more and more difficult and if you get stuck the going or the situation will get more and more harder. This has some truth because it is when those who act tough are not as tough as they seem until they get stuck in a situation they are as not as tough as they appear. This is what I think about this saying. I think that this saying has a lot of truth to what it means.

Favorite Character Survey

!) Montanna
 a)skeeter
 b)The Help
 c)Outspoken
2) Rachelle
 a)Jack
 b)Nightmare before Christmas
 c)He is awesome
3)Jasmine
 a)Snooki
 b)jersey shore
 c)outspoken
4)Bob
 a)Billy Bob Thorton
 b)Billy Bob Thorton the Movie
 c)he is cool
5)keagen
 a)Pablo
 b)The Backyardigans
 c)good singer
6) Nora
 a)Olive Penderghast
 b)Easy A
 c)she is funny
7) Debbie
 a)Daphne Wilder
 b)Because I Said So
 c) Repetative
8)Shaurice
 a)Spongebob Squarepants
 b)Spongebob Squarepants
 c)He is cute

Dragons Den:Life Lesson

The life lesson that I had to learn the hard way was the time when someone trusted me enough to tell me something huge but I ended up telling my other friend witch I thought I trusted then she told someone else and it went on and on until it got to the point where the entire school found out. What I learned what that I felt terrible after this and I told myself that I was not going to do it again. I might do it sometimes now but i know now who to tell and who not to tell. I think that if you want to make friends make sure you choose the right people. I am a type of person that likes to be alone most of the time but if I always have to have someone on my side when I need them the most. I know who the right people are. I know not to trust anyone with anything big unless they are someone I know I can trust but if it gets in the wrong hands, that's when i know who the wrong person is. 

Always make sure you know the person before you tell anyone anything, like E.M Forster said- One must be fond of people and trust them if one is not to make a mess of life.

plot assesment rough draft

Exposition:
Characters. Miley kardashian
Setting: San Pasqual Academy
Conflict: Later on in the story she gets pregnant, likes to get into fights, she tries to switch her life, away from drama but she cant she is soon to be kicked out.

-Rising action:(foreshadowing)
  gets into drugs, fights, ditching classes, awolling, sexual confuse,)
Complicaton;
Climax-pregnant and sexually confused
Falling action:starts focusing in school, getting away from drugs and drama as much as possible (getting her act together.) She starts taking pregnancy classes and starts using drugs and her houseparents help her.
Denouement:giving  her baby for adoption. She starts thinking about her future. She unfortunately doesnt  know who the baby daddy is.
Flashback-She has a flashback that she gets drunk with her friends and got rapped by an older looking dark man.
Flashfoward-She has a flashfoward that she wants to become a singer and help the sick people as well as foster kids.

Dragons Den: Power Outage

During the power outage I was not scared but I thought it was actually fun. First i went to the cafe with the rest of the kids on campus. They had a rap battle but i thought it was kinda lame=0. Meanwhile they were playing music and a movie at the same time, I don't know how but it appeared to work out. We danced for a while then we just hung out for a while. Afterward I came home and my house and I came home and we told scary stories for a while, then we all slept in the living room. I thought it was fun but unfortunately its over now.!

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"Dog Star" before you read: special animal

If I ever had an animal or favorite pet I would write about him/her right now but unfortunately I don't, so I am going to write about if a pet can be a human’s best friend. I personally think that a pet can be a human’s best friend. I think that if you are really close to your pet you can accomplish making a relation with a pet that may feel like a human is there, because no matter what you’re pet will always be there. Pets, I think, are not like humans. I think pets are beyond just a friend they are more related to you in some way. I think pets can always be a human’s best friend as long as they are being treated right. You can also do things with your pet best friend that you can do with another person, like ,tell them secrets, some pets might not understand but some do, also like play with them or hang out whenever you want to. I am an animal lover myself but personally I think pets can become a human’s best friend and there nothing wrong that. This is what I think of it myself.

The most dangerous game sequel

I woke up the next morning and laid there on that nice comfortable bed thinking, did I do the right thing. I heard bangs and scream downstairs so I decided to let the humans go. I felt like a hero but I also felt like a murderer. I went to take a shower and took the blood of my hands, wash my face and brush my teeth. I went downstairs to eat breakfast when I heard loud gunshots outside. I ran down to the basement but apparently I locked my self in. I heard loud footsteps upstairs like someone was searching for something or someone. They stopped so I looked through the basement to see if I would find a copy to the key for the basement. I found it. I quietly opened the door and all I saw was a strong light that came from the kitchen and holes through the walls from the shooting. I ran from the basement to the bathroom and from there I went to the kitchen. I couldn’t believe what I saw. I looked around and the kitchen was covered in blood .I looked through the drawers to look for a knife for backup but apparently that didn’t work they were all gone. I ran outside and there were 2 dead bodies and on top of their bodies laid a note that said don’t worry you won but you haven’t seen the prize yet. TO BE CONTINUED...

Dragons den : shoes

Most of the time you might see me wearing converse that's because that is my favorite shoe brand. I really like converse because they are very comfortable and you can use them for my favorite sport basketball. I really like this brand because there is so many and I wish I owned every pair. I like the purple kind because it is my favorite color and my favorite shoe. I see a lot of people on campus wearing them because they are in style and they will always be. This is my favorite shoe brand and what I think of them.

The Most Dangerous Game” Plot Change

In the story "The Most Dangerous Game" general zaroff  is a man that thinks animals aren't good to hunt for and decides to make a decision. he plans to hunt humans to "solve" his problem. if i were in his shoes i would not hunt for anything at all, but i had to hunt for something it would be fish. anyways i think that his decision was terrible decision. i think the plot of the story would change