Wednesday, November 9, 2011

hird Person Narrator: Plumber, Princess, & Attacking Turtle

Once upon a time, in a castle there lived a princess who was clean and Germaphobic. One day at school she got invited to a ball at an aquarium but she didn't want to go because usually there ends up to be  something bad like an argument or something.  Her best friend conviced her to go because she told her the cutest guy was going to be there. So they decided to go.
       Next when they got there it got really cold so Alyssa (princess) decided to use the restroom to change. When she came out all  her friends where gone. She shouted out all the names of her friend that she knew. They appeared to be at the top of the aquarium looking at the turtles. Her friends all tried to make her do something that she had never done before... They wanted her to make her hands touch something that has lots of germs in it... They wanted her to put her hand in the tank and touch a turtle. She reached in and as soon as she touched the dirty water she freaked out. Her friends around her taking pictures and watching her slowly. Next she reached in all the way and she felt what she thought was a tiny turtle. She took out her hand and thought about what she had done. She thought it was a mistake. She turned around and looked at all of her friends. They had nothing to say. They wanted to tell her something was behind her but they couldn't speak it was like something was holding their mouth down.
       Then someone ran in and said "There is a giant turtle behind you!"
She didn't believe them because she had never seen a giant turtle before so she walked away. When she realized everyone stood still and nobody was kidding she turned around and saw the biggest turtle she had seen in her life. She ran as fast as she could. She ran down the stairs trying not to trip over her shoes.. All she remembered was running and her friends at the door holding it open for her. When she woke up she was on her bed and it was all a dream.

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